a bit to loud
I really liked the elastic effect in the thump percussion, it really feels like its pounding then retracting. The electronic dibs and dubs were also really well placed as support on that.
I had to take down my pc's wave volume to 50% for my ears to not automatically close off to the sound though.. but then it was great.
Maybe work a bit more on melody next (not that melody is missing here, its just in the detail, i mean if there were even more melody it would be more awesome) and youre going to end on my mp3 player. :þ
Right now music like this to me sounds like listening to boards of canada. :)
(should be a compliment anyway)
Keep it up. (and check out my latest 2? :þ)