beautiful and calming.
cant think of anything else to say that does it justice.
-cal.
beautiful and calming.
cant think of anything else to say that does it justice.
-cal.
Very interesting, creative and enthralling.
And dont get me wrong when i say the raw voice, instead of a 'perfect pitch american popstar' voice, makes this music have so much character.
keep making worlds.
-cal.
the only actual 8bit track in the whole contest, go figure.
but did you take the style from my tracks? cause its very recogniceable, just curious.
(apart from the drumset i still need one of those, never found a proper vst)
Sadly i do have some criticism for you, there is never anything interesting going on, to me this track sounds like canvas, there is to much space that has potential to add something into, also the two halves dont fit together.
regards.
-cal.
Thank-you for your candid review. The criticism is understood, I wrote it in more than one session and the parts are rather distinct - The space your referring to is supposed to be filled by animation- which was the point of the contest. I wanted to make several atmospheres to advance the story. I am glad it kept the judges interest more than yours!
As far as your perception of its likeness your style, I'm sorry you feel that way but my influences for this track are much older than my knowledge of you. Im sorry but you had no influence on this track at all.
i have no clue why this is in the 8bit section, its chip alright- but nothing is going on but crushed noise, the background is bland and way to repetitive to be of any interest.
sorry but first off this has way to much reverb to it wich ruins the atmosphere, the melody itself is fairly original, the drums arent 8bit either but 32, and the triangles used for bass are hifi even.
Such a shame because this couldve been a pretty good 8bit piece if you had only made it with actual 8bit instrumentation.
-cal.
Thanks for your thoughts. In retrospect, I think you've got a point about the reverb. You're also correct about the drums and the "triangles" (although I'm not sure exactly what you're hearing there), but this mixture of 8-bit and other samples does not bother me. If this piece was "purely" 8-bit, I would have had to cut several melodic lines out of the mix because of voice limitations. That would have been an interesting challenge, and maybe the track would have been better as a result of these restrictions.
Original progressions, soundbits, just very enjoyable to listen to man.
Listening to these things make me more proud on that i make 8bit myself.
Especially the two progressions at 0:11 are nice.
I remember bucky o hare, used to watch a good friend of me play it on nes when i was younger.
Also loved the show heh, even had actionfigures of it.
Glad you dig the song man, Bucky O'hare is my shit.
perfect pacing and soundbits imo, though here and there the melody couldnt keep my attention its alot better than what most people make as 8bit here on newgrounds.
greets.
-cal.
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Extensive freelance classical and retro videogame music composer, currently retired from the internet.
Age 41, Male
composing and things
when i was still a little cal
Netherlands
Joined on 8/11/09